Ah, the love for small,
miraculous creations!
She's so tiny one's
impulse is to whisper.
I kneel before her and
stare
at each little whisker and
claw.
She toddles, bandy-legged
under the sofa, where,
lost and invisible in the
shadows,
she emits small whimpers.
Outside, in the infinite
grandness,
she follows me
smelling new smells
and licking dew off the
leaves.
I see afresh
the beauty of the simple
things,
close to the ground.
When she wanders off
I feel the distance
between us
and the precarious nature
of being,
and being cared for.
A tender balance, not
precise.
No bigger than my two
fists
her little spark lights my
day.
(Infinite, hit, invisible,
emits, rhythm, impulse, distance, kneel, creation, whisperings,
fists, precise. )
This is such a beautiful account of having a new pet in the house and the maternal feelings that it invokes.
ReplyDeleteFabulous poeming. I love the emotions you evoke, and appreciate the skill in the placing of the slant rhymes.
ReplyDeleteI love this! Reminds me of when we got our second puppy! She was so small I followed her around outside afraid she would slip under the fence!
ReplyDeleteWonderful and uplifting..
ReplyDeleteA sweet perspective.
ReplyDeleteNeat. And one cute puppy.
ReplyDeleteThis is a beautiful tribute to a puppy. I love it, Veronica. We just lost one of our older dogs a couple of weeks ago. This piece is healing for me. Thank you. Licking dew from a leaf is a great detail to draw us closer to earth.
ReplyDeleteVeronica, I love this tribute to your puppy. I am a huge animal lover myself. We have 4 dogs, a cat and a bird, and I wouldn't have it any other way.
ReplyDeletePamela
This so heart warming and I love the photo as well! What a wonderful tribute!
ReplyDeleteHeartwarming love story!! And what a cute little puppy!
ReplyDeleteNow you've gone and made us fall in love with her. Great photo,
ReplyDeleteElizabeth
What a cutie! The words flowed so naturally in this poem of puppy love.
ReplyDeleteWhat an adorable poem and pooch, I want one!
ReplyDeleteThank you for your comments. It feels good to share words and pictures :)
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