The landscape below us
becomes familiar
and I have a sense of
homecoming
in my adopted land,
as we circle Faro,
defying gravity in this
metal canister.
I see our shadow race
below us
as the salt marshes come
closer,
looking like blue-green
curds
their organic shapes held
together
by threads of green salt
bush banks.
Along the edge of the land
there is the golden sand
and the white, lacy froth
and the blue, blue sea
wrinkling into the far
distance.
I hold my breath as we
roar
above the runway
and press down into my
shoes,
head down, gripping hands
I clear away all plans
Then we're stopped
and standing on the
tarmac.
New
plans are made. Prayers are said.
Bags are grabbed
'Thank you God for our
daily bread'.
(Gravity,plans, thread,
salt, breath shadow, sands, shoes, bread, sense, head, landscape)
Nicely done. It always fascinates me how people take and tackle the words and create totally different topics from them.
ReplyDeleteLove the way the sea 'wrinkles'...
ReplyDeleteNice write from a ferris wheel!
ReplyDeleteVery beautiful....culminating with thanks..loved it..
ReplyDeleteMy wordle here..
http://rameshsood.blogspot.in/2013/08/in-vast-landscape-of-myth.html
RS:)
Nice landing...enjoyed your piece.
ReplyDeleteThere is something epic,mystic lovely about the line "as we circle Faro" ... stunning visuals :)
ReplyDeleteYou capture the sense of wonder, and even a bit of the fear that flying brings me. I just looked up Faro on a map of Portugal. What a blessing to live in such beauty. Your description of the salt marshes brings yearnings to visit the ocean. Lovely write!
ReplyDeleteHave to agree with Brenda, your visuals created a longing to be near the sea and the sand. Glad you had a happy landing,
ReplyDeleteElizabeth
http://soulsmusic.wordpress.com/2013/08/03/cloud-shadow/
The simple thanks at the end of the poem fills my heart with joy--as it does yours, I'm sure.
ReplyDeleteWhirling with Robert and Me
I, too pray when flying! Before, during and after!
ReplyDeleteLuckily flying in Australia is not that bumpy except for going over the dividing range to approach Sydney so I am more relaxed now. However you poem was beautifully crafted, I really enjoyed it.
ReplyDeleteYou have written it really well...
ReplyDeleteexistentialism
That is one thing I never did , fly in a plane. Excellent poem, did a good job with the images.
ReplyDeleteluv it; we just got to give thanks for it all the beauty of the adventure and the landing
ReplyDeletemuch love...